Chapter 158 – Labor of Troops

Author’s Note:

Many readers have been asking about the estimated completion date. Here’s what I plan for the remaining plot: Volume 3 is called “The Phoenix Sings,” focusing on the growth of Youlin’s career. The final volume is called “The Phoenix Returns,” focusing on Youlin’s daily life in the capital with his husband and their court life.

Volume 3, the career arc, has a relatively detailed outline. It may seem like there are many characters, but it’s necessary for the plot development and character growth. These people will become allies in the final volume when the protagonist returns to court. Without laying the groundwork in this volume, the conclusion in the final volume would feel weak and thin. Why would they support the protagonists together? Why would they become the protagonists’ allies? They’re like chess pieces scattered on a chessboard, ultimately becoming pillars of the court, an important growth line. What role do the protagonists play in their growth and changes?

Some readers might find certain supporting characters annoying… But perhaps because I climbed up from the bottom myself, I understand the essence of society more deeply. There’s no unearned help unless you’re useful to them. Temporary sympathy, goodwill, or personal charm aren’t enough to sustain long-term cooperation. Only eternal common interests can maintain a relationship (even including love).

A few days ago, I saw a comment on “Half Mountain Farm,” saying, “The author seems to understand the ‘rules’ in interpersonal relationships quite well. Maybe in real life, they interact with this aspect a lot. Writing dialogue gives a sense of being particularly smooth and worldly. Many readers on Jinjiang might not be accustomed to it.” I was quite surprised. Reflecting on it, perhaps my writing style is influenced by my position in a relatively worldly job that involves interacting with many people. Because of my contact with diverse individuals, my understanding of human nature is indeed pessimistic. I habitually analyze the motives behind others’ words and deeds. This style of writing might not be popular, leading to complex supporting characters. I’ll study story logic and reader satisfaction more closely next time, aiming for balance. The comments section is great. Please don’t argue or attack each other. If you disagree, just ignore it. Feel free to express your thoughts; I’ll read them, but I won’t change my mind easily. Changing the outline arbitrarily can lead to writer’s block!

But I personally enjoy such satisfying moments, where the protagonist’s unintentional actions change the fates of many people.